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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2014 5:45 pm
by ross adey
DaveJ wrote:ross adey wrote:
actually like this one a lot, but not too keen on the font. a/f/a imagery goes though, it's very nice.
One minor thing I'd change on this is to keep the artists/songs in line, from number 10 on they don't sit quite well, in my opinion, I'd keep em in line. Kind of a weird jump in the text.
agreed, the uneven tabbing is pretty noticeable
Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2014 9:14 pm
by polar sky
ross adey wrote:DaveJ wrote:ross adey wrote:
actually like this one a lot, but not too keen on the font. a/f/a imagery goes though, it's very nice.
One minor thing I'd change on this is to keep the artists/songs in line, from number 10 on they don't sit quite well, in my opinion, I'd keep em in line. Kind of a weird jump in the text.
agreed, the uneven tabbing is pretty noticeable
I'll change it. There, done. And as far as a font, what are you wanting?

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 9:37 am
by long shadows
Just having some fun seeing what I could come up with. Not a serious contender though. Other existing submissions are way better. Just thought I'd share.

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 4:38 pm
by polar sky
long shadows wrote:Just having some fun seeing what I could come up with. Not a serious contender though. Other existing submissions are way better. Just thought I'd share.

I like the group of sixes like that. Really cool logo.
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 5:41 pm
by Mexicola
Yup - love this concept ^^^
Looks like a TV ident

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 6:18 pm
by jcnporter
long shadows wrote:Just having some fun seeing what I could come up with. Not a serious contender though. Other existing submissions are way better. Just thought I'd share.

Very cool. I think if you did a full design it would be a serious contender.
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 6:24 pm
by jcnporter
polar sky wrote:ross adey wrote:DaveJ wrote:
One minor thing I'd change on this is to keep the artists/songs in line, from number 10 on they don't sit quite well, in my opinion, I'd keep em in line. Kind of a weird jump in the text.
agreed, the uneven tabbing is pretty noticeable
I'll change it. There, done. And as far as a font, what are you wanting?
I think the font suits the darker feel of your other design better, but then I prefer your other design, although this one's great as well. Just my opinion.
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 7:59 pm
by Negamuse
long shadows wrote:Just having some fun seeing what I could come up with. Not a serious contender though. Other existing submissions are way better. Just thought I'd share.

Someone should take a picture of this on a shitty 80s CRT TV, as if it WAS an ident. That'd be cool.
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 9:06 pm
by Mexicola
5-minute job for a giggle.
Props to Long Shadows for the original, which I think is great.

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:01 am
by long shadows
Hey thanks for the props. I'm thrilled that people like it. I made a CD image along the same line as well.
My concern about the design is that its so overt (and has no subtlety or texture) if anyone with a keener eye for design feels like reworking it, please have at it.

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:11 pm
by polar sky
MrMessiah wrote:long shadows wrote:Just having some fun seeing what I could come up with. Not a serious contender though. Other existing submissions are way better. Just thought I'd share.

Someone should take a picture of this on a shitty 80s CRT TV, as if it WAS an ident. That'd be cool.

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 4:16 pm
by Negamuse
polar sky wrote:

Yeah, I like that

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 4:47 pm
by polar sky
MrMessiah wrote:polar sky wrote:

Yeah, I like that

This could be an insert, of course it would need to be squared up: (Long Shadows, I hope you don't mind me messing with this.)

Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:06 pm
by asymmetrical head
long shadows wrote:Hey thanks for the props. I'm thrilled that people like it. I made a CD image along the same line as well.
My concern about the design is that its so overt (and has no subtlety or texture) if anyone with a keener eye for design feels like reworking it, please have at it.

Yes Polar Sky and Long Shadows! that cover would be awesome!
on the CD Long Shadows, perhaps space out the numbers so that the shapes in the middle can have some more space between them like you have on the cover design?
Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:32 pm
by rotane
polar sky wrote:
Juicy!
In all seriousness though, this is totally awesome.
Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 9:33 am
by long shadows
Polar Sky. You Nailed it. Looks awesome. How did you rework the image to get this effect?
Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 9:38 am
by long shadows
polar sky wrote:MrMessiah wrote:polar sky wrote:
Yeah, I like that

This could be an insert, of course it would need to be squared up: (Long Shadows, I hope you don't mind me messing with this.)

Please mess away. I love your other designs and feel honoured if anyone likes it enough to try to build on it.
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 1:04 am
by long shadows
asymmetrical head wrote:
on the CD Long Shadows, perhaps space out the numbers so that the shapes in the middle can have some more space between them like you have on the cover design?
Thanks for the feedback assymetrical head. Here's a rework of the CD.
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 4:27 am
by Goiter Sanchez
polar sky wrote:
Oooof, that's awesome looking!
Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:26 pm
by Aesthetics