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Oyster Poem Number One:

The three-chambered under parts the
mantle heart, pumps muscle
many thin-walled the heart, the
fish, from muscle, supply of
is and small, parts products
The blood of two kidneys

Bladder in my knees,
all I can do is watch,
I have no knowlege of
what goes on inside my body.
Roosters on barbed wire
Glass of water under a full moon.
Something big his way comes,
destroy's and creates.

(random words exually)

some people are just so goddamn lazy, here, i've gone through the trouble of taking literally 5 seconds to find this for you.

if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

Aaaawh...Don´t be like that

He might be working on another 'monument' of poetry.

I await with bated breath.

hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

through a glass wall
i can see sometimes








sometimes i feel
alone








and i want to break the glass--
the closest i ever come
is coming inside someone

ZX-Pilot wrote:

hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

fresh = pretentious. yes, pocket hitler. have a nice. Pie. your welcome. oh, and this is the BoC board, not the Blue Oyster Cult board.

hexagon son wrote:

ZX-Pilot wrote:

hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

fresh = pretentious. yes, pocket hitler. have a nice. Pie. your welcome. oh, and this is the BoC board, not the Blue Oyster Cult board.

Oh. Cocky. Toire wa doko desu ka?

up your oshiri wo ana, baka-san.

*unfolds rocket launchers from eyes in anticipation of mega-awesome city-crushing robot flame war*

did you write that? not too bad, but you forgot the "-" in ステーキ。just teasing... ^_^

すばらし！！！
however, i prefer to be kakoii rather than kawaii. cute is for girls. perhaps you could have had the title as haiku thread, rather than poetry thread.

im not familiar with tasuketee. what is that/does it mean?

hexagon son wrote:すばらし！！！
however, i prefer to be kakoii rather than kawaii. cute is for girls. perhaps you could have had the title as haiku thread, rather than poetry thread

kawai i meant for locked poetry thread, not you.

It's your tricky Hiroshima-ben.


Tasuketee is cry for help.


P.S. Glad you like my haiku. Thank you for compliment.

certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

hexagon son wrote:certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

Yes I agree. Tokyo is happy go lucky pizza hut wanabees.

ZX-Pilot wrote:

hexagon son wrote:certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

Yes I agree. Tokyo is happy go lucky pizza hut wanabees.

LOL! just curious, you live/been to japan before? your 日本語 is better than mine. i been here since november.