____twoism

I made this track about a year and a half ago before I quit making music because I thought it was too clearly a BOC ripoff and was afraid to share it. I'm trying to get motivated to create more music and it's so hard to judge your own creation. I made it using an Octatrack mk2 and an Analog four mk2.

Are the Sesame Street samples just too much? The 124 views I have are all from me and I just want honest feedback.

If it's complete shit just tell me... It's literally only one of three tracks I've ever created in my life.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_N8mhebpM6o

I'm going to be honest here, it's not very good.

But don't despair, it's your third song ever!
You shouldn't worry about your songs being good or not, or if it's a rip-off or whatever, the important thing is that you constantly make more tunes! And if you're not happy with something, use that to improve your next song!

The more songs you create they'll slowly start getting less and less shit until you have something rocking that's completely your own sound!

Don't quit music after your third song man.
I've made over 100 songs, 85% of them being absolute garbage, but the 15% that end up good make it all worthwile.
Just continue creating, you already have some good gear and YOUR third song ever was a LOT better than my third song...