JosephG wrote:This is very interesting. Keep up the good production!

Thanks man! Youtube unfortunately does not help with the "production", but I'm glad you find it interesting haha.
ninetyoneplus wrote:I like it! Nice use of BoC + you have a good voice.
BUT
Your mix is bad. Way muddled in the...400hz to 1khz range? I think, I can't be 100% on that, but all the kicks and bass and samples are all garbled up in that range. Though it could be youtube - it fucks up sound.
I'll try to post it on a better website, I actually had to force the stereo on the song by adding "&fmt=18" on the end of the link, because otherwise it would sound really
really bad. That's youtube for ya! But even then, the quality is no where near the original unfortunately. I will say I feel like there is a little too much bass on my vocals, while the rappers might have been a bit thin.
polar sky wrote:Not into it.

sorry. The beginning wasn't that bad until you started rapping, it sounded too forced and almost like you were reading it from a piece of paper, it sounds almost comical.
I say this respectfully in a critiqued way.

I'm guessing you're new to the whole rap thing?

I don't actually rap on this song (Ft. means Featuring, I had someone else rap), and if I did try to rap, it would sound a whole lot worse haha. My style is a lot more like kid cudi, while I would compare the rapper (KG) to someone like asher roth, which is either you love or you hate kinda thing.
dono wrote:^ same
For me, it's the bad mixing that does it for me. It's too centered and the high/midrange is too pronounced. But like ninetyoneplus said, this could be youtube. I doubt it though.
Could be youtube? Hmm...just maybe

. My mix may not be perfect, but it's not even close to what the original mp3 sounds like, much cleaner in my opinion.
And when you say "same", do you mean the rapping? I've had a few people say it sounds alittle "cheesy", but I feel like it fits pretty well. Either way, thanks for the feedback!
Jakerpoo wrote:benji, it sounds lie you listen to drake a lot
I would assume your talking about the rapper on this song, KG. And yes, I think he does haha. I'm more of a Cudi fan myself.
tontonz wrote: some of BOC can sound quite good with hip hop, and a lot of it doesn't. Just because it wasn't meant to be layered or complimented. It was meant to be left alone and enjoyed for what it is.
But who's to say what is and what isn't? It's all opinion based and entirely up to us, the music makers.
tontonz wrote:Though I love to dabble in genre mixing and boc is such a fun element to use. I.E. -
I like it man, very dark and moody. A lot of my other stuff is similar to this, although i tend to be a alittle spacey-er haha.
Thanks for all the feedback so far guys!