Personally, I like to think of songs in phrases. Like part A, B, C, D, etc. I find this gives songs structure, and makes them more fun to listen to. I don't really like songs that build onto the same repeating loop, and then just fade out (unless it's like an interlude track). But yeah, it's a good song. It just needs a little more time and structure, I think. But if you think it's complete, then keep it that way.Vostok wrote:Other people said the same thing but I really can't think of a way to make it less repetitive. Maybe I'll fix it later.bearhead wrote:It's a bit repetitive, but it has a really solid ground, I think.Vostok wrote:
I made this yesterday. It's not as good as most of the stuff in here but oh well.
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It's a good foundation, but it needs a changing melody layered over it otherwise as people have said, it will start to get a little repetitive.Vostok wrote:
I made this yesterday. It's not as good as most of the stuff in here but oh well.
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this is tripppyhoneypower wrote:https://soundcloud.com/nickhohn/perform-system/s-BWo98
i made this tune this morning.
its like im tripping on acid with daft punk possessed by evil high fashion models
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Here's a new song I wrote yesterday. Would love everyones opinion.
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something I'm working on with bearhead- first drum sample courtesy of him.
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Where%27 ... RJOqRliEAg
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Where%27 ... RJOqRliEAg
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That URL ain't working for me mate.TaoTapeTao wrote:something I'm working on with bearhead- first drum sample courtesy of him.
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https://soundcloud.com/maketapesounds/w ... iphop-beatGH wrote:That URL ain't working for me mate.TaoTapeTao wrote:something I'm working on with bearhead- first drum sample courtesy of him.
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Where%27 ... RJOqRliEAg
sorry people heres one that works
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