One on Twoism Volume 6 [Submission Topic]

DaveJ · Post by **DaveJ** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 1:31 pm

Techboy wrote:that CD is stunning!

wow, cheers man. Was an image I was gonna use as the insert, but glad it seems to work alongside the rest.

Thanks bud!

rotane · Post by **rotane** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 2:44 pm

DaveJ wrote:Cheers rotane for the font name too! It's lovely Hope its a freebie!

It's not, unfortunately…

rotane · Post by **rotane** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 2:45 pm

DaveJ wrote:
Techboy wrote:I mean, it's not TOO similar, whilst still being thematically consistent. Seems like a plus.
I hadn't even noticed to be honest, hopefully it's not a problem. Besides the circle I don't see much to be honest with you guys, but feel free to critique the stuff for sure. Hope it is a plus! ha

I do see some similarities, just the circles, but the rest of the artwork, I'm not so sure. Just my opinion though, and certainly was anything but intentional, just went that way with the idea I had. I feel it's different enough, the circles are there because of the concept I explained earlier. I'm glad you guys like it though. Am uploading the full artwork with a disc which I just finished now also.

I doubt it's gonna be a problem. Let the community decide, of course

GH · Post by GH » Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:46 pm

rotane wrote:
DaveJ wrote:

Hopefully that image uploaded, I have only done it once and it took a few goes, ha. But this is the cover I've been working on so far. Cheers!
Liking this a lot, but i feel it's a bit too similar to OOT4…

It's similar to OOT4 in the same way that a pizza is similar to a frisbee.

I really like it Dave. Very tasteful.

Mexicola · Post by **Mexicola** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 8:44 pm

Besides which, what's wrong with similar? The artwork for Campfire Headphase draws threads from MHTRTC.

It's lovely, well done again.

DaveJ · Post by **DaveJ** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:37 pm

Cheers guys, glad ye like it, thanks a lot. I just think the circle is the only thing, but hopefully people don't diss it because of that ha

Appreciate it guys!

Negamuse · Post by **Negamuse** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:02 pm

DaveJ wrote:Cheers guys, glad ye like it, thanks a lot. I just think the circle is the only thing, but hopefully people don't diss it because of that ha

Appreciate it guys!

I like the circles. Given it's volume 6, avoiding the obvious hexagons/666 motifs is showing a lot of restraint and I like how you've mirrored it in having tree rings on the inside art.

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:44 pm

Inspired by 1970s Penguin books, been done elsewhere I know, but for a bit of fun...

Mexicola · Post by **Mexicola** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:54 pm

jcnporter wrote:Inspired by 1970s Penguin books, been done elsewhere I know, but for a bit of fun...

Nice concept!

DaveJ · Post by **DaveJ** » Tue Mar 04, 2014 11:53 pm

MrMessiah wrote:
DaveJ wrote:Cheers guys, glad ye like it, thanks a lot. I just think the circle is the only thing, but hopefully people don't diss it because of that ha

Appreciate it guys!
I like the circles. Given it's volume 6, avoiding the obvious hexagons/666 motifs is showing a lot of restraint and I like how you've mirrored it in having tree rings on the inside art.

cheers man, can't be using no hexagons, sacred shit

Glad you got what i was going for. Thanks

Techboy · Post by **Techboy** » Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:35 pm

jcnporter wrote:Inspired by 1970s Penguin books, been done elsewhere I know, but for a bit of fun...

haha I like it!

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:34 pm

Another design, hope it doesn't seem like I'm spamming here...

Synthetrix · Post by **Synthetrix** » Thu Mar 06, 2014 12:57 am

rotane wrote:I'm having another idea for the text treatment, but before i incorporate this into a full cover design, i wanna ask you: do you like this at all?

I love this type treatment. Very nice!

Jonse · Post by **Jonse** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 10:11 am

jcnporter wrote:Another design, hope it doesn't seem like I'm spamming here...

This but with DaveJ's font would be amazing.

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 1:53 pm

Rodheh wrote:
jcnporter wrote:Another design, hope it doesn't seem like I'm spamming here...

This but with DaveJ's font would be amazing.

Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback, I'm not totally happy with the font either, still messing about with it at the moment.

Mexicola · Post by **Mexicola** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 11:04 pm

Not submitting this, as it's shite, but been playing about tonight and figured we could use a laugh. One or two of you might recognise yourselves...

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 11:09 pm

Mexicola wrote:Not submitting this, as it's shite, but been playing about tonight and figured we could use a laugh. One or two of you might recognise yourselves...

I think it looks great!

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 11:10 pm

I think this might be a better version of mine.

Going to work it into a full design anyway, might tone down the colours as well.

Mexicola · Post by **Mexicola** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 11:19 pm

Firstly, you're too kind

Secondly, that's a significant improvement you've made with yours. Nice one.

jcnporter · Post by **jcnporter** » Sat Mar 08, 2014 11:32 pm

Thanks and seriously, I particularly like the figures and the - is it a suburban street? It's got a sinister look, even without the pyramid and eye. Mess around with it and submit something, why not?