Original Poetry Thread

oyster · Post by **oyster** » Fri Jul 20, 2007 3:24 am

Oyster Poem Number One:

The three-chambered under parts the
mantle heart, pumps muscle
many thin-walled the heart, the
fish, from muscle, supply of
is and small, parts products
The blood of two kidneys

Cupz · Post by **Cupz** » Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:59 am

Bladder in my knees,
all I can do is watch,
I have no knowlege of
what goes on inside my body.
Roosters on barbed wire
Glass of water under a full moon.
Something big his way comes,
destroy's and creates.

(random words exually)

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:27 am

some people are just so goddamn lazy, here, i've gone through the trouble of taking literally 5 seconds to find this for you. :roll:

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 9:54 am

if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

Cupz · Post by **Cupz** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:13 am

Aaaawh...Don´t be like that :wink:

Oliver · Post by **Oliver** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:33 am

He might be working on another 'monument' of poetry.

I await with bated breath.

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 3:11 pm

hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

saturdayindex · Post by **saturdayindex** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 3:13 pm

through a glass wall
i can see sometimes

sometimes i feel
alone

and i want to break the glass--
the closest i ever come
is coming inside someone

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 3:39 pm

ZX-Pilot wrote:
hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

fresh = pretentious. yes, pocket hitler. have a nice. Pie. your welcome. oh, and this is the BoC board, not the Blue Oyster Cult board.

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:04 pm

hexagon son wrote:
ZX-Pilot wrote:
hexagon son wrote:if i find this thread has dropped to the bottom of the thread with "nobody" posting in it i wont be impressed. less than 20 posts and already 2 threads X'd. not a good start.

My original fresh and powerful poetry thread is locked like the worst criminal. I refuse to be a puppet on a string on the BOC board. So what if i haven't seen the original old rusty thread. I started fresh nice poetic thread. I made a protest. This is underestimation of creativity. You must be a pocket Hitler. Have a nice. Relax. Thank You.

fresh = pretentious. yes, pocket hitler. have a nice. Pie. your welcome. oh, and this is the BoC board, not the Blue Oyster Cult board.

Oh. Cocky. Toire wa doko desu ka?

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:07 pm

up your oshiri wo ana, baka-san.

Infinite E · Post by **Infinite E** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:49 pm

*unfolds rocket launchers from eyes in anticipation of mega-awesome city-crushing robot flame war*

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:45 pm

Time for haiku;

PANPUKIN PAI

panpukin pai
SUTEKI!
KIREI!

panpukin pai
NANJI DEMO II YO!

oooo, umaiiiiii, panpukin pai
oooo, irimasu, panpukin pai

Motto ikemasu.

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:57 pm

did you write that? not too bad, but you forgot the "-" in ステーキ。just teasing... ^_^

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:14 pm

And here's one haiku dedicated to hexagon son:

詩歌の糸

kawai... kawai!

TASUKETEEE kawai
yasumasete kudasai

私の親愛なる氏の管理者
それの鍵を開けなさい

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:22 pm

すばらし！！！
however, i prefer to be kakoii rather than kawaii. cute is for girls. perhaps you could have had the title as haiku thread, rather than poetry thread.

im not familiar with tasuketee. what is that/does it mean?

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:30 pm

hexagon son wrote:すばらし！！！
however, i prefer to be kakoii rather than kawaii. cute is for girls. perhaps you could have had the title as haiku thread, rather than poetry thread

kawai i meant for locked poetry thread, not you. :wink:

It's your tricky Hiroshima-ben.

Tasuketee is cry for help.

P.S. Glad you like my haiku. Thank you for compliment.

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:34 pm

certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

ZX-Pilot · Post by **ZX-Pilot** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:36 pm

hexagon son wrote:certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

Yes I agree. Tokyo is happy go lucky pizza hut wanabees.

hexagon son · Post by **hexagon son** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:43 pm

ZX-Pilot wrote:
hexagon son wrote:certainly better sounding than tokyo dialect though, wouldn't you agree?

Yes I agree. Tokyo is happy go lucky pizza hut wanabees.

LOL! just curious, you live/been to japan before? your 日本語 is better than mine. i been here since november.