Sleep

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Howdo y'all!

Made a short film for a uni project, not great but was fun to make. Check it out here

Don't forget that it's in high quality too

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=052s6iR1HJM

[Cupz]

I want your camera Made a comment on youtube.

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Haha cheers, it's a Sony EX1... somewhere in the £4000 region I think.

The beauty of being able to borrow it (along with tripods, microphones, and various other extremely expensive equipment) ....ahhh the joys of university

[BrandNewRetro]

I think it's awesome and the soundtrack is perfect

[88marquis]

Do you always sleep with your shoes on?

Very nice man, music fits perfectly.

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Do you always sleep with your shoes on?

Very nice man, music fits perfectly.

When they look that good, you just can't take them off

[Tarsier]

the acting was not very good at all, the guy was just walking around and doing regular stuff and he still managed to make it look not believable
some constructive criticism try not to go back to the same shot like when he is picking up the keys, it goes back to the same shot which looks bad, some of the cuts are a bit weird like this too and dont fit together. you can see the camera shadow in one of the shots walking down the street
i liked the sound when the time changed on the clock and the way it went like that at the end too. was there some sort of metaphor or something? or is it just "guy gets up, walks to the store, sees a random guy in the telephone booth, drops his groceries and runs back home"?

i hope this constructive criticism helps!

[747Music]

Nice vid, great soundtrack. now go back and get your groceries.

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Haha it wasnt meant to be good, it was made purely for the technical side ie editing etc not the artisitc But thanks for the crits