Indie prog rock track - High (feedback appreciated)

[metamorphosis]

Hi guys,
any feedback you can give, particularly on mixing etc, for the following track would be appreciated-
it's a project between a couple of friends, we're all in different cities, so we're just contributing a track at a time without any pre-planning, and seeing where that takes us:


It's not quite in electronica territory, but hopefully you like it.
M@

[valleaux]

This is groovy.

[metamorphosis]

Thank you! Timing is a weird combination of 7/8 and 8/8 btw - it made my collaborators quite annoyed.